11 February 2008 @ 09:57 pm
Fic | Darkness Eyes | 1  
Title: Darkness Eyes
Pairings: JaeHo
Length: Prologue + 1/?
Author: heartoffire03
Rating: PG
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance, Angst
Summary: One man's sadness can bring him his ultimate happiness..
Disclaimer: I don't own them.

A/N: Weee~ Here's Chapter 1!!!~ Dedicated to my unni, [info]kyuushin</lj> . She's baaack!! I LOVEE CHUU~♥

.:Prologue: Depressed, Deprived, Different:.

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"You tumble, you fall, you tumble, you fall..
..Do you even know who you are anymore?"

.:Chapter 1: I wished for you:.

Years crawled mercilessly slow yet so mindblowingly fast after that simple event concerning that raven haired boy who waved innocently at me. But how would something be so slow yet so fast at the same time you may ask? Well, the times I spent locked up inside the estate behind mountain-loads of books seemed to drag for an eternity but on the other hand, I now find myself a grown man with almost all of the business chains all over the world under my thumb.

My childhood life flashed like lightening in front of my eyes and I could do nothing to stop it from passing me by. I watched the world outside from a closed window, feeling pity for myself yet so angry at the same time. The elders did little help of soothing me either. They forced long hours of pointless lectures upon me; constantly reminding me that I was not one of those boys I often see playing outside and that my life was much more important than all of theirs combined. Talk about pressure...

With a depressing and isolated childhood and forceful lectures from the elders, I had changed according to their will. They wanted me to be powerful, strong-willded, elegant and coldhearted person. My old, innocent and friendly self was now long dead and gone, locked up somewhere deep inside my soul; only to be replaced by a more sinister and uncaring one. I was aware of this change but I didn't give even the slightest care. I'm living for myself and for myself only, not even for the elders who were surely pleased of my outcome.

"Barge into people. Crumble their lives if you have to. Just make sure you get to and remain at the top."

The words that the elders coldly told me on the day of my graduation are still ringing in my hears. Constantly reminding me what I've been doing for the past two years. I was living up to the elders expectations perfectly and smoothly. Sometimes, doing all these evil deeds feed my ego, fueling my hunger for more power and thus, making me into a much more horrible person that I already am. Just as I'm about to get carried away by this dark thirst, the memory of that pale boy would flash in my mind out of now here. Pulling me back into my composed, normal self. There was something in that memory that kept a piece of my childhood, continuing to haunt me up until now.

My grip on the leather-cladded steering wheel of my Porsche loosened a little bit. Another tireing day at work finished and done, with yet another one lurking dangerously close. I swivled my gaze to the green illuminated numbers, separated by a constantly flashing two dots.

11:09

My eyebrows raised. I finished work much more earlier than any other days, usually I'd find myself driving the city's dark and empty streets at 12:00 or 1:00 in the morning. So this was definitely a surprise for me.

11:10

'One more minute until 11:11.'

Wasn't that the time of day when people wished? I used to do it when I was little and wish for the most incredolous and exageratted wishes. But then again, that was when I was little and that meant it was a long time ago, far too long. But it doesn't hurt to wish every now and then right? I was alone anyway, it's not like anybody would see me. Sighing and closing my eyes, I wished...

'I want to see you again. Where are you?'

Opening my eyes, my sight was immediately greeted by two headlights coming straight at me. My reaction was too slow so I couldn't possibly avoid the coming vehicle. My senses shut down on me as I watched in slow motion the front of my car bashing against the other. My body too numb to feel anything, of which I was thankful for, I wouldn't be able to bear the pain. The next thing I knew was I could feel a huge nauseating feeling cascading all over my body, as if I was standing on my head. I could slightly hear distant voices yelling at me. But I was too tired to utter a reply, my body was about to shut down and I was more than willing to let go. I cast one last look at the still working clock in front of me before finally letting go of the last strands of consciousness, resigning myself into pure darkness.

11:11. I wished for you.

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A/N: =OO DUN! DUN! DUUN! OH NOES! What's going to happen to Yunho!? Will he be okay!? Is he going to survive this!? BUWAHAHAHAA~! *Chokes* Deeeeehh~ I'm sorry for the short update/chapter but I was just itching to post this chapter up ^^ I'll update soon so please don't kill me yet! ^^ Comments please??

Aaand PICTURES!! (It's my first time doing this and I find it cool! XDD) 
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Our cold and DASHING Yunho *shivers*


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I'm feeling: accomplished
I'm listening to: Two Hearts - TVXQ
 
 
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Kisu[info]ai_no_kisu on February 12th, 2008 02:39 am (UTC)
*shivers as well* teehee...
ADORED the way you ended...ah so good please continue!
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 02:32 am (UTC)
aw thank you!
very sorry for the late reply ><;;

CHAPTER 2'S UP! (:
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Me fail english? That's unpossible![info]love_cassiopeia on February 12th, 2008 03:00 am (UTC)
That was very good~ especially with Yunho as a business man! He looks hot!

I love your style of writing! Update soon!
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Glasses!Jae =D[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 02:33 am (UTC)
thank you~!
*drools* yeps! very hot indeeed~

very sorry for the late reply ><;;
CHAPTER 2'S UP! (:
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0m0[info]0m0 on February 12th, 2008 03:26 am (UTC)
cold yunho? looks more like dashing yunho!
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TheRetardedGenius...?: France Jae <3[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 02:34 am (UTC)
ahhh~ *mouth bubbles* you're SO right XDD

very sorry for the late reply ><;;
CHAPTER 2'S UP! (:
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:.*Mizz Dee*.:[info]crystaldee on February 12th, 2008 09:01 am (UTC)
Oh nooooooooooooo...
What happened to Yunnie????

Gyah!! The picture!!
Yunnie's soo hot in there!!
Kekkeekkekkke....

Waiting for the next part!! ^___^
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 02:36 am (UTC)
OMGGG~
i knooooow~ i can like literally feel myself melting from that stare of his *melts*

very sorry for the late reply ><;;
CHAPTER 2'S UP! (:
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arianna[info]starry1 on February 12th, 2008 12:26 pm (UTC)
how come cold yunho is such a hottie! lol
waiting for the next chappie :)
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 02:37 am (UTC)
i believe cold!yunho's hotness will never have an answer XDD

very sorry for the late reply ><;;
CHAPTER 2'S UP! (:
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[info]irerd_taga on February 12th, 2008 06:50 pm (UTC)
Oh Yunho wished to see Jae again! But his car smashed into another car! Will he be alright? Are they going to meet at the hospital? So many possibilities!

Will await the next chapter with bated breath.
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 02:37 am (UTC)
mmhhm, so many possibilities indeed!

very sorry for the late reply ><;;
CHAPTER 2'S UP! (:
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ara_niey[info]ara_niey on February 13th, 2008 04:15 pm (UTC)
*gasp*
yunnie met with an accident?
hmm..i think he's gonna get what he wished for..or maybe not..keke~
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 02:38 am (UTC)
*gasps with chuu*
yes he did T.T

very sorry for the late reply ><;;
CHAPTER 2'S UP! (:
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 13th, 2008 04:43 pm (UTC)
ah....Yunho had an accident?? Don't tell me the person who's dricing the pther car is non other than Jae!!!!

I hope both Yunho and the other driver are ok...or Maybe Jae is the doctor at the hospital where Yunho was sent to????
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 02:39 am (UTC)
*huggles* i missed chuu~ chloe-saan
nope! dont worry, that wasn't jae ^^
and noooo, jae's not a doctor either (:

very sorry for the late reply ><;;
CHAPTER 2'S UP! (:
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 19th, 2008 02:47 am (UTC)
I miss chuuuu too heartoffire03-chan....

How have you been???? *glomps*
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 03:03 am (UTC)
i'm .... not so good i guess??
how about youuuu~?
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 19th, 2008 03:23 am (UTC)
busy like hell...

What's wrong?? Anything i could help??

Love you!! Hwaiiting yeah!!
*send you loving smoochies and huggles
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 03:51 am (UTC)
ahhhh~ chloe-san's busy, i see ><

oh noo!! i'm not like sad or anything XDD
i'm just in the hospital for a week now..is all!! ^^

i luub you too!!!
*catches smoochies and huggles*

ive put up chapter 2 for darkness eyes btw! =D
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 19th, 2008 04:45 am (UTC)
OMG!! what happen to you????

Are you ok???? I didn't know, I'm so sorry...
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 05:31 am (UTC)
ahhh~ just broke some bones...^^;;
the result of my clumsiness
...had to get surgery too...
im fine, im fine! just a lil achy but nevertheless fine :D
i cant move much tho T.T
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 19th, 2008 07:58 am (UTC)
OMG!!!!!!!!! You poor thing.. Please take care! ILUSM!!

*huggles much*

PS: can't glomp you cause you're recovering form broken bokens...
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kyuu-chan[info]kyuushin on February 14th, 2008 02:47 pm (UTC)
UWAAA~
the lateness occured again.....T.T
for me??
honto??
*glompstackleskisschu* wuv u!!!!

uwaa, nice one, can't wait what will happen..^^

ahhh yunnie!!!!!
atashi no goshujin da....!!!!!! <33
love you~ <33

thanx 4 da pic XDD
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 02:41 am (UTC)
it's ok!! *huggles* i missed you sooo much~
yep! for chuuuuuuuuu!!! i luuub chuu toooo~!!

ahh arigtou gozaimasou (:

very sorry for the late reply ><;;
CHAPTER 2'S UP! (:
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asuka2507[info]asuka2507 on February 21st, 2008 12:13 am (UTC)
well im one of the believer of 11:11. i didnt expect u to apply it here... amazing... oh... poor yunnie... he wished to meet that lil boy that caught his heart, mind... soul???* i think soon to be* awwww~~~ accident... i dont think he will die yet... cos its just first chapter. it would be too harsh to make the main character die in the first place... haha..*heads off readin next chappie*
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 21st, 2008 12:37 am (UTC)
when it comes to making wishes, i'm a STRONG believer. 11:11 is obviously one of them. but i came up with a person, whenever im up at 12:00 midnight, which is like everyday basically, (even when it's not new year), i wish :) probably cos for me, that special time is like the turning point of the day i guess? the old day just went bye-bye and a new day's right around the corner. besides, seeing the clock turn 12:00 is so overwhelming to me. i always think, "wow, i survived another day and i'm seeing a new one." right? ...aish, i'm so weird ><;;
LOL. when i write my stories, i basically PUT myself in a character's position and write as if it was ME IN it. especiall with this one cos i'm writing in 1st person POV.

mmhmm soul? that'd be soon. not right now but definitely soon (:
hmmm, you'll see if yunnie died next chapter, you'll see...
as for killing off a character at the begining of the story, i've done that before in my other fic "torn wishes". feel free to read it whenever you can :)

*gets shot for the bribe*
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