18 February 2008 @ 09:07 pm
Fic | Darkness Eyes | 2  
Title: Darkness Eyes
Pairings: JaeHo
Length: Prologue + 2/?
Author: heartoffire03
Rating: PG
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance, Angst
Summary: One man's sadness can bring him his ultimate happiness..
Disclaimer: I don't own them.

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A/N: Ahh~ *waves* Hello everybody!! I'm very sorry for the lack of life and updates of my fics ><;; I've been in a hospital for health reasons (obviously) so yeah....Is that a good enough reason you guys?? T.T But thank goodness my mom finally brought my laptop here =D Now i can update!! ^^ Anyway! Enough babbling from  me sooo ENJOY Chapter 2!! ^^

.:Prologue: Depressed, Deprived, Different:.
.:Chapter 1: I wished for you:.

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"Escaping death can turn out to be hell itself..."

.:Chapter 2: Second Chance or Punishment?:.

An endless darkness cloaked my eyesight, leaving me to an impression that I am most likely trailing between the lines of sleep and consciousness. I tried blinking but the sensation of my eyebrows brushing up and down never came. I tried moving my fingers but, yet again, I failed to do such a task. The realization soon dawned upon me that I was either already dead or paralyzed and about to die any minute now.

But no. I can't be dead. Despite the fact that I couldn't feel my heartbeat, I could still think and even tried to command my brain to move my muscles. Do people who're near death think before they could be engulf into nothingness for all eternity? But then again, if I am nearing my death, aren't I suppose to watch (helplessly) as my entire life flash right in front of my eyes? If that's so, how come all I see is darkness? But in my case, there really wouldn't be anything good to see before I go. I'd rather not see my lonely childhood once again; not with all the books and the walls that caged me before. How about the pale boy? The memory of that pale boy that somehow robbed a piece of his innocent and carefree childhood and kept it locked up deep within the memory, only to appear when he so badly wanted some joy in his life. I scrambled for that one memory; I know I've been a cruel person but I reall did not want to leave this world with such a sad and cold tone - for once.

Just as this dawned on me, my cruel faith played with me, for the last time. I could feel myself slowly getting pulled towards endless sleep. I fought against it, putting every ounce of my strength to desperately cling onto my consciousness. As more and more seconds ticked by, the push became unbearable for me to fight against. I sighed and let go of the last strands of life, letting darkness engulf my exhausted body. It consumed me quickly, so quickly it reached my mind in a second, forcing my eyes to close one last time. The precious image of that lithe, unknown boy slowly fading along with it.

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Voices. Different voices speaking at the same time were filling up my sensitive ears. They seemed to talk in hushed tones, with a tone of urgency in them. Who were they? Where am I? Questions raced along my mind as the many voices raised in volume, as if I was coming closer to them. 

At that moment, I felt my brain switch back on to life, turning all the mechanics in it in order for me to move. I could now feel my body, my hands and my feet. Scared that this was just an illusion, I hesitantly moved my hand ever so gently, only to immediately feel a soft sheet against it. A burst of hope and joy erupted within me, only to come out as a loud gasp tearing through my throat.

The voices surrounding me abruptly stopped and I could feel diffrent sets of eyes resting upon me. I could feel worry in them too. Worry and, what's that, hesitation? In a blink of an eye, the voices erupted once again, this time coming louder than ever. They were too close to me. Too cose.

"Mr. Jung! How are you feeling?"

"Sir! Does anything hurt?"

"Does anything around your chest hurt?"

"Does your arm hurt too?"

"How about your head?"

"...Especially your eyes..."


I furrowed my eyebrow together and pushed against the bed that I was on. Hands immediately clasp around my arm and back, helping me to sit up and find a comfortable spot. Despite this, the questions continued to pour fromt their mouths. They all seemed to ask the same thing, desperately waiting for an answer from me. Raising my hand up, the voices quickly died down. Once again, I could feel their stares directed to me. I cleared my throat and slowly opened my eyes.

Darkness.

Pure darkness, not even a tint of light.

My eyebrows crossed together in confusion. I raised another hand and brushed my eyes, hoping that the darkness would fade away instantly. But to my dismay, the darkness covering my eyes did not diminish one bit. At this point my heart started to thump within me in fear of reality...There is no way I could be what I think I am...There's just  no way....

"Sir? C-Can you see anything?" 

That was the final blow for me. I never knew the words see and anything can tear down a persons life into crushed pieces. I was too scared to even reply back but I had to know and make sure that I was, despite the heartbreaking reality that now dawned upon me..

"N..No..I can't..." I throatily replied.

Sighs of dismay was what greeted my ears after my reply.

"I...I'm sorry sir...." A brave voice said. "...W-we couldn't do anything to save them...."

He ducked his head and pushed his back against his bed's headboard. He was over the brink of crying and trashing the whole room. He could've never imagine being in this sort of situation in a million years. What would become of Jung Yunho now? He had survived a car accident, he should be thankful right? But unfortunately, his precious eyes did not.

The great Jung Yunho has now been reduced to a blind man, living in a pitch black world. Escaping death and living in his new world now seemed like hell to him.

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A/N:
OMG. Who saw that coming huh??? Eeeep, I'm so sorry to all Yunho fans T.T I had to do that cos well ... it's part of the plot ><;; I'll update soon! ^^ Comments make the hospitalized girl happy! =D

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I'm feeling: lazy
I'm listening to: Song For You - TVXQ
 
 
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detskie[info]detskie on February 19th, 2008 07:15 am (UTC)
get well soon and don't tire yourself with fics while in the hospital ok??? i'm sure all your readers agree with me on this!!!!

thank you for this update...will be waiting patiently for the rest...am excited with the way this story is going!!! a blind yunho?? it's new >>>>
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 04:18 pm (UTC)
*hugs*
thank youuuu~ i'm fine though, really :)

i'll update soon! dont worry! ^^
oh really? it is? YEY! :D
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 19th, 2008 08:09 am (UTC)
OMG! Yunho has gone blind? fufufufu poor thing....ah, *blink* I finally understand your title...

You are awesome!! You can still update when you are in a hospital recovering from BROKEN BONES!!
*squishes you* NO!!!! I take that back..I forgot I can't squish you cause you've broken bones!!!

*smack myself repeatedly
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 04:21 pm (UTC)
YEP! see? i DO leave hints everywhere...
you just have to piece them up together :P

oh thank youuu~ i've been itching to update so i begged my mom to smuggle bring me my laptop XDD

*squishes YOU*
eeeeeeeeh~ gomen, i cant squish that hard lately XDD
stupid bones and stitches! D:<

*stops you*
now, now it's alright (:

i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuub chuuuuuuu~♥
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 19th, 2008 04:25 pm (UTC)
I love you mmmmmmoooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee!!!!

Go and sleep yeah..it's late..
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 04:27 pm (UTC)
no way man! i lub you x1234567890 HA!

eh!? i just woke up...the people just came in to give me my lunch..
i think YOU should SLEEP..
i believe it's 12:30 there??
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 19th, 2008 04:31 pm (UTC)
yeah..what time is over you side...

eek? I've forgotten which country you're from?? I know kyuu-chan is Malaysian like me..
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 04:36 pm (UTC)
it's 11:35 in the morning :)
i only know the time cos im from the philippines (ASIAN TOO! WOO!) and i call my family back there once in awhile :D

well as you know im FROM philippines but im living in new york ^^
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 19th, 2008 04:45 pm (UTC)
*smack myself!!

i think you did mentioned that youre from philippine but i dun remember about NY though...wow...you are living in NY now..how envious!!!
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 04:49 pm (UTC)
*stops you*
heeeeeey~ stop smacking urself :|

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah~
i'd rather live in the philippines..i could do so much more stuff there..
i've lived here for ... 2 years now....before that, i lived in england ... for 6 years? YEP! ^^
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 19th, 2008 04:54 pm (UTC)
wow! totally jealous now..
I've never been to US or England...

I've only been to Singapore (duh? I got my degree there), Australia, Hong Kong, China, Indonesia and Cambodia.....
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 04:58 pm (UTC)
eeh~ they're alright...
i've been to a BUNCH of places, my parents drag me everywhere XDD

philippines, dubai, england, france, italy, prague, germany, spain, portugal, dubai, abu-dabi, japan (<33), hong kong (OMG. did i see you!? XD), australia, US, singapore, korea :))

i begged my parents to take me to an asian tour and they finally agreed!!
going this summer, when school's out OBVIOUSLY, sooo~ i'll see you!?!? XD!
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 19th, 2008 05:03 pm (UTC)
sure..we can meet up if the time permits...
I'm in Perak while I think you are most likely will be in KL only???

yawn..it's abt 1.10am now..I better go and sleep....talk to you later yeah..take care..
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 05:22 pm (UTC)
yeah....i think so.... :\
aw well!! it doesnt really matter :)
we're not even THAT sure yet but i'll catch up on that matter with you (:

O_O SORRY for making u stay uppp~
*fluffs pillows* GOOD NIGHT MORNING chloe-saaan ♥
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 20th, 2008 02:00 am (UTC)
it's ok!! I love, love talking to you dearie....
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 20th, 2008 02:09 am (UTC)
but ur tiiiiired

*wails*

chloe-san should NEVER stay up THAT late talking nonsense to moi..
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 21st, 2008 03:21 am (UTC)
but...but i love you...
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kyuu-chan[info]kyuushin on February 19th, 2008 11:11 am (UTC)
uwaaaaaa~~

yunnie blind!!!!!!

noooooooooooooooo!!!!! T.T

hun..u sick???
u dun tell ur unnie bout it...but i hope ur fine, don't stress urself too much dear..
i love you key, get well soon ^^
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 04:23 pm (UTC)
eeep! gomen! gomen! mian! sorry! i had to make yunnie blind...><;;

sick? naah, more like injured XDD
BUT!! i'm alright, i'm alright, i'm alright!
deeeeh~ i didn't want to worry you and besides, i just got my laptop yesterday (after begging my mom to bring it)

I LUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUB YOU MOREEE!!
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kyuu-chan[info]kyuushin on February 19th, 2008 05:51 pm (UTC)
haha...no prob..
but i think we really have something huh...
you make yunnie blind...
i make him mute..gah..i feel sorry for my honey..hehe

ahh, then rest much much.kehe
i miss u...<33

no i ILU more..XDD
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 06:01 pm (UTC)
O___________O
WHOA! I JUST NOTICED THAT! HAHAHAHAA~

d'aawww~
i miss chuu too~ <3

y are u still up unni?
isnt it 2:01 AM there??
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kyuu-chan[info]kyuushin on February 19th, 2008 06:50 pm (UTC)
^^
we have some similarities i guest...

<33~~~

why am i still up huh...
me and my fren were talking bout how damn stupid is the highschool girls in our country this days...
i'm sooo ashamed to even admit that they live in the same country as me...
haha, it is almost 3.00 a.m....XDD
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 11:06 pm (UTC)
highschool girls huh??
I'M A HIGHSCHOOL GIRL MAN!! T.T
but hey, dont stay up late unni..
wasting time talking about those ppl is just pure nonesense..^^
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kyuu-chan[info]kyuushin on February 21st, 2008 07:51 am (UTC)
hun..
i dun mean you..
i mean the highschool girl at my country lol...
gah, they have a lot of fighting among them...
thats noramal, but to have their fighting scene being post at youtube now that make me feel damn shame of it...T.T

haha...we just got bored lol...
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 20th, 2008 02:04 am (UTC)
Sorry for butting in!!

But i must say both of you are very evil...
heartoffire03-chan, you blided Yunnie and kyuu-chan muted him...

sob sob..my poor Yunnie...let Jae shows you with lotsa, lotsa TLC!! *send Jae's huggles to Yunnie*
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 20th, 2008 02:08 am (UTC)
OHAYOU GOZAIMASOUU~
up early chloe-san??

R O T F L O L M A O . . .
ahh~ gomen nasaii chloe-san but writers must always make decisions that aren't always nice but will surely make the plot much interesting for the readers to read..
dont cha think? ^^

LOL! *catches huggles too!*
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on February 21st, 2008 03:24 am (UTC)
Ohaiyo!!! but it's night time for you now right?????

i know i know..but still you are evil!!!!!
*pout
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 21st, 2008 03:49 am (UTC)
konbanwa! yep! night time for me now!

*wails*
NUUUUU~ dont hate me chloe-san!!
i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuub youuuuu!!
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jaeholife[info]jaeholife on February 19th, 2008 02:54 pm (UTC)
YUNHO IS BLIND sob***sob**
where jae , he have to met yunnie
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 04:24 pm (UTC)
*gives tissue*
i'm sorry T.T
jae will be coming soon! (:
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ara_niey[info]ara_niey on February 19th, 2008 03:44 pm (UTC)
ahhh~i didn't see that coming..should've known from your title ne?

poor yunnie~*sigh*
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 19th, 2008 04:25 pm (UTC)
woooooo~
you didn't see that coming??
*punches air* YESHA! I'VE ACCOMPLISHED ONE OF MY TASKS :DD
yep, should've :)))

ahhh~ dont worry! jae will be coming in soooon (:
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junsu_hyung[info]junsu_hyung on February 20th, 2008 03:08 am (UTC)
Aw! Get better soon! I love where this is going! Poor Yunho! *snuggles* Can't wait to read more! XD

I know how you feel about making Yunho blind. My story involves Junsu being likely to die any minute if he is not careful. >
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 21st, 2008 12:20 am (UTC)
thank you! i'll hopefully be better soon! i dont want to spend the rest of my break being sick! bleurgh.

poor yunho indeed! i just posted chapter 3 today so it's all open to you! happy reading! (:

O___________________________________O
MAN! JUNSU! LOL! i totally cracked up at that last sentence. well hopefuly susu'll be careful in the future :P
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junsu_hyung[info]junsu_hyung on February 21st, 2008 12:29 am (UTC)
>< That's not nice! Doubt it. You'll have to find out if he makes it...
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 21st, 2008 12:42 am (UTC)
*wails like crazy*
;_____________________________________;
MIAN HAE! it's basically the main idea of the whole story ><"

i just posted chapter 3 up tho! so you won't have to be left hanging! :DD
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junsu_hyung[info]junsu_hyung on February 21st, 2008 01:02 am (UTC)
*huggles you and gives you tissue*

Mian hae? *is lost* I'm a stupid American... could you please tell me what that means?

I read it already! :D
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0m0[info]0m0 on February 21st, 2008 12:09 am (UTC)
yunho is blind?
now i get the title.
slow arent i.*sigh*

but but how is he gonna see beautiful,
gorgeous n sexy jae!
ahhh but knowing u, ur fic will be full
of twists n turns that we can get lost
if we r not careful. =D

till the next update,
take care ok.
but if updating ur stories will make
u happy n less bored, by all means
pls do...(^_^)
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 21st, 2008 12:18 am (UTC)
yep...yunnie's blind in this fic *eyes water*
LOL. it's alright omo-san! at least you're here! (:
see? i dropped alot of hints from the very beginning, it just depends if you actually catch them :P

mmhmm, you don't need eyes to see the beauty of your love ones.
my cousin once said that to me. and that's where i got the inspiration from it so this fic is definitely personal and close to the heart (:

aw thank you omo-san!
hopefully the plot for this fic won't bore the crap out of you and actually be interesting ^^

you dont have to wait anymore! i just posted chapter 3, it's all open! ^^
thank you for the worry! i'll hopefully be ok soon! and YES, writing is my LIFE so i NEED to write :DD

thank u for reading!~♥
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asuka2507[info]asuka2507 on February 21st, 2008 12:28 am (UTC)
OMG... now everything makes sense... ur title and ur story.... awwww~~~ i didnt see that coming... it would be a sad love story i presume.... awwww~~~ i wish he will have his own hope to live and move on.... i think kyuu-chan's making a mute yunnie and ur making a blind version.... awwwww~~~ both of u seems to have some sort of connection... well... i guess i need to read the next chapter then.... *slowly clicks on the 3rd chapter*
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on February 21st, 2008 01:19 am (UTC)
LOL. i tend to give out main hints right at the beginning of a story so it really depends if people actually catch up on it :P

sad love story? yeah....i guess so :| sorry if it's not your ideal cup of tea but i specialize on angst...

LOL. yeah, we discussed that and i was like "AH! CONNECTION!" XDDD!

LOL. i already commented u on the other one :D
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[info]irerd_taga on February 21st, 2008 09:52 am (UTC)
Yunho survived but has become blind!
Will Jae be his nurse or physical therapist!
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