09 March 2008 @ 09:49 pm
Fic | Darkness Eyes | 4  
Title: Darkness Eyes
Pairings: JaeHo
Length: Prologue + 4/?
Author: heartoffire03
Rating: PG
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance, Angst
Summary: One man's sadness can bring him his ultimate happiness..
Disclaimer: I don't own them.

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A/N: Oops! Sorry for the lack of update for this, I sort of forgot what was suppose to go on for this fic, all thanks to that smut I wrote which, mind you, fried my brains too But anyhow, since I have nothing better to do and I have no homework *gasp* I'll update Darknes Eyes instead! ^^ Enjoy~

.:Prologue: Depressed, Deprived, Different
.:Chapter 1: I wished for you
.:Chapter 2: Second Chances or Punishment?:.
.:Chapter 3: Going Crazy?:.

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"Get to know people more before prouncing on them, they might not be who they were before.."

.:Chapter 4: 'Proper' Introductions:.

I, honestly speaking, have never felt so irritated and confused before. Irritated because my supposedly-savior-of-a-cousin, Yoochun, decided to bail out on me just when I needed him and left my room with a chuckle and an amused, "I'll come by later hyung!" before heading for work. That idiot. He had left me with a loud mouthed stranger named...what was his name again?

With the constant bickering right next to my ear, I couldn't help but feel as if I was at some sort of carnival instead of a hospital room. What ever happened to my solemny silent room that I've been forced to call home for the past...months? Really now, how dare this person barge through without a care. Despite the constant bickering and the incoherent stream of words tumbling down the others mouth, I couldn't bring myself to give shot him a threatening glare accompanied with sharp words that I usually bark out with ease. I blindly tilted my head to the direction where his voice was booming from. In a split second, Jaejoong's voice stopped abruptly followed by an awkard silence that hung over us. I was expecting my ears to welcome the silence but, to my surprise, my hearing longed for that irritatingly warm voice of his...

"Oh, I'm sorry," Jaejoong says obliviously, "Was I babbling?"

I couldn't help but let a smile graze across my face, how long has it been since I let my muscles curve the way they do when they smile. How long? Somehow, I felt a shift in Jaejoong's mood again; warmer and more happier. Was he smilling?

"Yeah," I replied. "A little bit."

Jaejoong laughed, "Really!? Just a little!? Oh wow, that's a new record for me.."

I didn't reply back to what he said. Partially because I didn't know what he was saying talking about and also beacuase I didn't feel like talking to a, well, stranger.

"You see, I tend to ramble on and on and confuse anyone that I talk to. My pronounciation also tends to get all spazzy when I talk quickly - but really, I don't think anyone can pronounce things perfectly when they're talking fast. Don't you think so too? How about you? What do you do? Do you ramble on too? Or are you the not talking type and gives people shrugs and evil glances here and then? Honestly, I can't blame those people, they must hate life really -"

I growled, stopping the other's rant midsentence.

"First of all, I don't know you so who are you? Second, what are you doing in my room? Third," I coldly said, turning my blind gaze on him to a frown. "Why, please tell, are you telling me all these things?"

A pause.

Then a laugh. He laughed. Laughed as if my questions did not mean anything and that my cold tone did not scare his guts at all. Did he not know who I was? 

"Oh I'm sorry, I'm guessing you weren't paying attention when I introduced myself - "

The nerve of this guy...

"I'm Kim Jaejoong. You can call me anything you want, Jae, Joongie, Jaejoongie, or hell, even BooJae if you want to." He said, laughing after his statement. "I'm telling you these things because we'll be spending our time together more often - "

I growled once more.

" - Don't kill me just yet. I don't want to die on my first day of work, that'd just bomb my currently-perfect resume." He laughs once more. "I'm in your room because your cousin, Yoochun-ah, called me in....obviously. Really now, shouldn't you know this by now? - "

My god. This guy was unbelievable...

The ugly sound of the chair's feet scraping against the floor filled the room, clawing at my eardrum painfully. I flinched and sighed loudly, he must've noticed it for I immediately felt his form leaning over me and a hand reached out to my arm.

"Are you okay? Does anything hurt?"

I growled....again. Is it just me or is this my 'growling' day?

"I'm fine - "

"Oh okay," A sigh of relief. "That's good, that's good..."

"Can we just get things straight?" I replied out of topic but straight to the point.

I felt him blinked and tilt his head to the side.

"Don't act too close and friendly me for I don't know you Aand no offence but I really am not interested in knowing you much better. If you're here because Yoochun hired you to be my personal nurse or just my company, I advise you to get out of my way and not do anything to bother me, which is basically anything irritating." I said coldly. 

He didn't reply and remained silent instead. A good choice in my opinion...

"First, I don't like anything loud. Second, don't ever call me by my name, Sir would be much appreciated and lastly," I raised my other hand up and peeled his hand off of my other arm. "I don't like any type of physical contact."

Pause.

"Are we clear?"

A sigh and a hesitant and much quieter chuckle, "Sorry about that, I'll try my hardest to not do any of those things. And yes, we're clear."

I could definitely sense a shift in his mood and aura. Maybe my words have impacted him more than I intended them to. I shook my head and mentally scowled myself. Since when did I started caring about other people's feelings?

I felt him move away from me and walk his towards the door, opening it to leave. The moan of the door float its way across the room and reached his ears. Maybe I really did hurt him...

"You know, I think you should smile more," Jaejoong says, that happy tone evident in his voice once more. "Yunho."

And with that, he closed the door, just missing a pillow flung at his direction.

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A/N:
I know, I know, nothing really happened in that chapter and I sincerely apologise for that but I was just so desperate to update this fic 'cos I was scared I'd loose my idea and will to finish it. I promise from this point on I'll try and write a more interesting chapter, one with things actually happening. I've sort of reached a writer's block after writing that smut (yes I know overeacting but I really am YOUNG to write a lemon like that one) So if you have any complaints, please blame the pancakes I was eating in the middle of the night a couple of nights ago...and [info]foolishlovexo  because we spazzed out over food and other crap on AIM until like 1:30 in the morning...JK! I luuuub her <33 

Anyways! Please do comment! They're really my only motivation as of now~♥

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I'm feeling: blah
I'm listening to: Song For You - TVXQ
 
 
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win03die: gackt_stare[info]win03die on March 10th, 2008 02:39 am (UTC)
ME!

-kicks Yunho-
he better give in to jae in no time because right now he's just being a self-centered, big jerk..

"sir"..
-huffs-

and a tiny typo: "Aand no offence" - And no offence

;]
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junsu_hyung: jaejoong - adorable[info]junsu_hyung on March 10th, 2008 02:47 am (UTC)
Oh, Yunho! *shakes head* Such a sourpuss!
Aw! Jaejoong is so cute here! *huggles him*
I can't wait to read more! I love this story! 8D
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a_azarine: pic#70183252[info]a_azarine on March 10th, 2008 06:40 am (UTC)
i really want to smack yunho's head! XD
glad that this jaejoong doesn't seem affected by those cold behavior (or he does?). btw, who is jaejoong here?

can't wait to see ice-yunho melts then ^^.
ah, i've just read the nc-17 fic. it's good, hon! doesn't feel like a first-time-writing to me ^^.
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asuka2507[info]asuka2507 on March 10th, 2008 07:50 am (UTC)
hehe... i feel much better after reading this... awww~~ joongie... he's a sweet guy... and i love him dearly.... gawd.... yunnie such a bad temper that he seems to get angry in wat joongie do... but its gonna be fun to see joongie teasing him... hwaiting ne~
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emeraud_hero[info]emeraud_hero on March 10th, 2008 10:14 am (UTC)
awww. so cute!
now it's time for joongie to tame his yunnie-tiger hubby! rawrrrr!
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on March 10th, 2008 03:51 pm (UTC)
kyyyyaaaaahhh! heartoffire03-chan!! You've updated!!

How are you????

I love this chapter..I think Jae owuld be the perfect solution to Yunho's black mood..He'll bring some sunshine into his dark life now...
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detskie[info]detskie on March 10th, 2008 04:29 pm (UTC)
i kinda like the jae here...i'm sure this one's going to be fun...can't wait for the next update...will be waiting !!!

thanks <333
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jaeholife[info]jaeholife on March 10th, 2008 04:56 pm (UTC)
you updated eheheh
anyway yunho stop being cruel
love u
thanks
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:.*Mizz Dee*.:[info]crystaldee on March 10th, 2008 09:12 pm (UTC)
*Smacks YunHo!!!*
How dare he insults Jae!

Fufufufuf...
Waiting for the next part!! ^___^
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callisto[info]callisto88 on March 11th, 2008 01:30 am (UTC)
Sorry for the late reply deza!>.<. I started reading the fic yesterday and only to complete the entire chapters today.

Ah I like this snobbish/aggresive Yunho, very SEXY i must say. Finally Jaejoong make an appearance, bah have been waiting for it. What connection does Yoochun and Jaejoong have?....don't tell me they're lovers again?!!.

Anyway Deza you're never too young to write a lemon/smut!. I'm proud of you...my little girl has all grown up now *sobsob*. Love the story, really fine details and a very nice story-line!....

More update please love!.
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anazianblonde[info]anazianblonde on March 11th, 2008 03:26 am (UTC)
jae is such a teaser here! still i wonder how they are going to recognize eachother? will they?
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ara_niey[info]ara_niey on March 11th, 2008 09:09 am (UTC)
hmm..cold yunnie..tsk..tsk..
i hope chunnie had warned jae earlier about his attitude..
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0m0[info]0m0 on March 13th, 2008 02:36 am (UTC)
jae's character here is really interesting.
cheerful, mischievious n with that "i dont care what u think or said". i like!
pls update soon..looking forward for ur next update.^^
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Corpus Delicti[info]xcorpusdelictix on April 1st, 2008 01:04 am (UTC)
Ah, I really like this! I read all of the chapters in one go. It's a good fanfic- poor Yunho. He had such an AWFUL childhood! I know that if I were he, I would have gone insane!! But that little TINY moment with Joongie was so adorable! and kind of bitter sweet...ne?

Ah, I can't wait for chapter five! I'll be waiting anxiously!
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Serious!Jae[info]heartoffire03 on April 1st, 2008 01:16 am (UTC)
oh thank you! oh wow man, you're everywhere in my journal tonight! HAHA XD! oh thank you...again. my goodness, i owe you alot of thank you's too!!

mmhmm...yeah...this fic is yet another personal one. his childhood is somehow a rendering of mine too. but his is just a tad bit more harsher y'know? >< HAH. yeah, i intend some adorable-ness in this chapter. and yes, definitely bitter sweet ^^

i'm still trying to get my muse bac on for DE but i just friggin CANT. i'm really trying tho! please don't give up yet >
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xkhan[info]xkhan on April 14th, 2008 08:54 pm (UTC)
cant wait for the rest of this fic!! <3<3
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