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heartoffire03
23 March 2008 @ 05:16 pm
Oneshot | 미안해요 (I'm Sorry)  
Title: 미안해요 (I'm Sorry)
Pairing: YunJae
Length: Drabble
Author: heartoffire03
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst
Summary: What if a 'sorry' doesn't make the cut?
Disclaimer: I don't own them

Heartoffire's Say: Whoa. I haven't posted anything up for a week now huh? Ehh~ Sorry, I've been planning and writing my YunJae entries for the competition so I barely had time to post things up. But at least you guys now have two oneshots to look forward to! ^^ But anyway, yes, this is angst, my kingdom. I haven't written angst in awhile and I had an urge to do so after editing [info]anim22  's oneshot (which, mind you, made me cry for the 2nd time in a row T.T)  This goes to unni ([info]foolishlovexo   ) cos she'll be going off for vacation until next month...which means I won't have anyone to kill with my brain teasers and spazz out over pancakes. I'm going to miss you T.T But anyway, enough babbling from me and....I hope you guys enjoy? *gets whacked*

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The air around them was stale. No, actually, never mind, it wasn't just stale, it was suffocating. Strangling and suffocating the life out of both Yunho and Jaejoong. Upon entering the darkened room a few minutes ago, Jaejoong didn't dare mutter out useless words to explain the situation and break the solemn and painful silence that hung over them.

Yunho was standing in front of the window with both of his hands buried deep inside his pants pocket , hiding the tightly balled fists from the other, also broken, soul in the room. Jaejoong, on the other hand, sat motionlessly at the edge of the bed with his back facing Yunho's and his head bowed and resting upon his slightly shaking hands. 

Usually, Yunho would've screamed out a stream of Korean words so rapidly even Jaejoong's ears would fail to aprehend what they were. But oddly enough, he was lost for words. Jaejoong, the usual babbler of the group, also stayed eerily quiet. A surprise for Yunho who expected the other to immediately jump into excuses and explanations and wave everything off with a loud laugh and carefree jokes...

'Aparently not...' Yunho bitterly thought to himself.

Yunho cleared his throat, breaking the silence between them for the first time. Jaejoong still did not look up from his position and remained immobile. Sighing, Yunho raised his hand and pressed it against the fog-glazed window, leaving an imprint of his hand. A hand that used to hold another...

"I'm sorry -"

He turned around with pained eyes to Jaejoong's spot, only to find noone there. Not even the slight creases on the bedsheet to indicate that someone had laid upon it.

Yunho shut his eyes and cursed inwardly. His eyes were playing games on him...

"I'm sorry for not being there when you needed me..."

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A/N: Puuuuuuuh. I haven't written angst in so long I think my skills are dieing >___>  Anybody understood the 'twist' at the end? *gets shot for lameness* Comments? Yes? No? You don't know/ :|

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I'm feeling: melancholy
I'm listening to: 미안해요 - Gummy ft. TOP
 
28 Tore Their Throats | Scream It Out
 
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anim22[info]anim22 on March 23rd, 2008 09:40 pm (UTC)
spot
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TheRetardedGenius...?: T-Logo[info]heartoffire03 on March 23rd, 2008 09:42 pm (UTC)
yourss~
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anim22[info]anim22 on March 23rd, 2008 09:50 pm (UTC)
Don't tell me Jae is death????I am really bad at guessing, poor Yunho(well if that's the case). This is the first time I comment with this account since if I commented with my other you wouldn't have known it was me^____^. Ahhh now you made me want to write again, I was taking a break from too much angst. Sorry for making you cry. I love how you describe the scene, and the details, I can imagine Yunho standing there...but poor Yunho.
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Lookingdown!Jaejoong[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 04:15 pm (UTC)
hmmm....it depends really. you can say jaejoong died but you can also say that he just left yunho.
ooh really? no wonder i couldn't see 'anim22' in any of my other writings comments.
ah! really? me?! an inspiration?! ohoho. that's GOOD to know, thank YOU. nahh it's alright! making people cry from writing is a good thing to accomplish. it means that your writing stirs up emotions inside the reader. so keep improving! ^^
thank you, thank you! my goodness, don't praise me too much! i'm still improving like you! xDD~
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LeeJae33[info]leejae33 on March 23rd, 2008 09:43 pm (UTC)
wow.. this sounds really interesting..
wonder what happened since Yunho is saying sorry?
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TheRetardedGenius...?: T-Booklet!Jae[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 04:12 pm (UTC)
oh thank you (:

hmm....it depends on what you make out of the situation. it could be jaejoong left yunho or that jaejoong died and, well, left yunho too...
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jaeholife[info]jaeholife on March 23rd, 2008 10:58 pm (UTC)
i think something had happened to jae...
ANYWAYS THANKS
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Smiling!Yunho[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 04:10 pm (UTC)
yep. something happened to jae...
the ending depends on you and what you make up out of it...

nonono. thank YOU for reading ^^
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Rie: hott![info]foolishlovexo on March 24th, 2008 12:30 am (UTC)
DONGSAENG! T_T ILU!♥
I read this already, but I must tell you! I love the twist, you're getting so good! Much much better then Unni!
I'm going to miss you!
♥♥♥
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Serious!Jae[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 04:09 pm (UTC)
UNNI!! *crushes* ILU MOREE~♥
aha, thank you. but, pah, i don't think so. i was delusional off those brain teasers when i wrote this >__>
*sniffles* i'm going to miss you more. you idiot, you're leaving me for a M O N T H . *dies*
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Bianca Love[info]oldwillow_brook on March 24th, 2008 02:17 am (UTC)
Wow. That was really beautiful. I really liked it.

Jaejoong is dead? Yunho is guilty for neglecting Jaejoong? For not noticing the downward emotions Jaejoong was feeling until it was too late?

Still quite beautiful. You got me caught at the first line.
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Serious!Jae[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 04:07 pm (UTC)
oh geez, thank you, thank you ver much.

hmm, when i wrote it, i intended jaejoong to be dead. like...oh i dunno, maybe jaejoong got into an accident, running away from yunho after a fight and yunho was...too late...probably why i put that last line...so yeah, this fic really is missing a whole load of chunk. ><

thank you again ^^
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moon1084: onesidedlook[info]moon1084 on March 24th, 2008 02:28 am (UTC)
ohmyjaeho did jae commit suicide of something? i am feeling so sad!
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Jae![info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 04:04 pm (UTC)
oh nononononono. jae absolutely did not commit suicide. nope.

it's either he left yunho or he.....died....

*runs before u could kill me*
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on March 24th, 2008 06:10 am (UTC)
Jae left or died??? I hope Jae left and not have died...

OMG!! Now i understand what oldwillow_brooke is saying..I agree..why is everyone killing Jae???

PS: I love your new layout..
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Glasses!Jae[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 04:03 pm (UTC)
hmmm...its up to you on what to make of the ending. i'm guessing you'd prefer jae leaving that jae being dead huh? xDD~

really?! everybody's killing jae?! oh noes. i didn't know. suwee >__<

ps. thank you! i love it too~♥
pps. *huggles* i missed chuuuu~
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on March 24th, 2008 04:49 pm (UTC)
I MISSED CHU TERRIBLY TOO!!!

Sorry, I've been busy..you can see from the not so much comments from me in LJ..sob sob sob...

How are you? All ok now???

*huggles and chus*
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 04:57 pm (UTC)
yeah! i think everybody's been busy lately :|
i mean, even i'm busy. look at the update-calendar over there ->

i'm okay! everything's all good :D
how about you? everything all good?

*snuggles*

btw, shouldn't you be sleeping? its nearly 1 AM there...
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on March 24th, 2008 05:02 pm (UTC)
I know..and I'm feeling sleeping....however, I can't help but reply to your comments!! Cause I've really, really missed you!!!!!

I'm glad that all is well with you..I'm ok, just darn busy with work...
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 05:08 pm (UTC)
well then sleep! c'mon, i'm here when you wake up anyway.

SLEEEEEEEEEEEP. i'd rather have you sleeping than talking to me (even tho i love spazzing with you)

don't worry. everything's alllright. no need to worry ^^
well, pah, work? you'll make it through! FIGHTO~!! ^^

*fluffs ur pillows* will u go now?! i'll cuddle up w/ u!!
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on March 24th, 2008 05:11 pm (UTC)
ok...promise you'll cuddle up with me???
okok..nite nite then..I'm really going to sleep now...
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 05:12 pm (UTC)
*turns the light off*

NIGHT NIGHT UNNI!

*shoves herself next to u*
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ara_niey[info]ara_niey on March 24th, 2008 12:22 pm (UTC)
what?why?..
jae was never there?there where is he?..he's..dead?o.O

of course..you left it hanging there on purpose didn't you?*smirk*

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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 04:00 pm (UTC)
...yeah...you can say that...

and YES, i did that on purpose too. it was suppose to be one of those open-ended writings y'know? >.
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Kelly:}: Couldn't ask for more ♥[info]storm_andstress on March 24th, 2008 01:35 pm (UTC)
Dongsaeng (Fine, I'll be the older one this once! Just cos we're the same age -.-) WHY YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEEEEEE :'(
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Happy!Jae[info]heartoffire03 on March 24th, 2008 03:57 pm (UTC)
aha! finally~~!! about the time you succumb admited the truth, jie-jie *sniggers*

ahh~ i'm sorry!! i really didn't mean to >< it was one of those 'spur-of-the-moments' and i was itching to write angst so y'know...

*huggles*
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Kelly:}: Couldn't ask for more ♥[info]storm_andstress on March 25th, 2008 08:40 am (UTC)
Oh, whatever! So do I call you meimei? LOL! Meimeiiii.

Ah, angst. Oh well. But it was well-written, anyway :D Everytime I decide to write a fic I end up... abandoning ignoring the idea. I never understood how come I could write compositions but not fics! *jealous*

*huggles*
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on March 26th, 2008 10:53 pm (UTC)
ahh~ sorry for the late reply T.T zao shang hao (i'm just taking my chances, i have a hunch you'll be reading this in the morning) meimei's been busy lately because of, oh surprise, surprise, school =___=

oh really? then don't write multi-chaptered fics. y don't cha just settle to oneshots or drabbles. they're really the easiest to write out ^^ especially if you wanna let things out like you since you spazz out from either hyperness or pissed off-ness or fangirl-ness

*cuddles up*
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