26 March 2008 @ 07:39 pm
Fic | Inseparable | 1  
Title: Inseparable
Pairings: YunJae / JaeChun
Length: 1/7
Author: heartoffire03
Rating: PG (for now)
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst
Summary: Their unmeasured love for one another might just be the driving force for their painful seperation
Disclaimer: I don't own them

Heartoffire's Say: Ehh. Just some random fic that I h o p e I'll actually finish. The plot's in my head but I'm still trying to come up with the chunk...But for now, just have fun with chapter 1 xD~

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A tiny fist connected with a chubby cheek with a loud slap as skin came in contact with skin in a harsh manner no one would’ve expected from two, extremely-flustered looking young boys. Both their faces scrunched up in a tight frown as they exchanged punches to one another, flinging their chubby arms everywhere. Both were out of breath but both had no intention of backing down. Their will to fight one another fueled their young minds to keep on going despite their already aching joints that threatened to give out on them.

With one audible grunt, the bigger one out of the two heaved the other down, pushing him to the asphalt ground with a loud thud. Something between a howl and a sob escaped the fallen ones mouth as pain burst out from his badly scraped elbow. Quickly returning back to his composed self with anger ten times as much as the original, he extended his legs out and kicked the standing boy hard on the shins. Catching him off guard, the other boy went tumbling down to the ground alongside him with a confusion expression plastered upon his face. Leaving no time, the boy with an abraded elbow latched himself on top of the other and began butchering the others face with direct blows from his tightly packed fists. But the other did not back down easily and decided to put up a fight; he pushed the other boy off of him, who lost his concentration, and seized the moment and punched back just as harsh as the ones that were given openly to him.

With the other one down lying helplessly on the ground and the other constantly pounding his fists, one would’ve called the fight quits, with the victory going to the still-moving person and the loss to the helpless looking one.

“YUNHO-AH! STOP!”

The boy immediately ceased punching and turned his head to where the voice came from; completely dropping his guard down. Noticing this as a great opportunity, the other boy scrambled to do anything – punch, kick, or what not – the other boy as revenge. Moving his head left to right, he saw a rock sitting down onto the ground beside him at an arms length, as if it has been waiting for him all this time. He grinned and extended an arm out and reached out for the rock, only to quickly take hold of the rock with ease. Glancing up, he noticed that the other boy was still distracted, seeing this as yet another opportunity, he raised the hand that clutched the rock –

“YOOCHUN-AH! NO!” 

– and slammed it against the side of the others head with all the energy he had left.

The words that were screamed out by another, much skinnier, boy running frantically towards their direction were nothing but muffled words to the others ears as he felt a warm liquid trickle slowly down his face and the need to shut his eyes becoming more and more unbearable by the second. Soon enough, his eyesight blurred and blackened as his whole body lost its feeling. A split second after, his body slumped down to the ground with a dull thud along and darkness engulfing his mind.

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[ Yunho ]
 

He bolted up from his sleep, breathless pants tumbled down his slight opened mouth just as beads of sweat sprinted themselves from his precipitating forehead and down his cheek, only to be lost under his loose white tee that he wears to sleep. Gently closing his eyes to calm himself down, he took a deep breathe and mentally told himself that everything was in the past. It didn’t matter anymore… 

‘Yes it did,’
a voice sneered in his head. ‘And it still does…’ 

A sharp pain erupted from his right temple, his hand shooting up to press against it and caress the spot at the same time. Unconsciously, his fingers went up and down a long scar running from his lower forehead and down to the middle of the side of his face; a reminder of the event that originally brought all the three of them together in the first place. He’d sometimes feel the blood oozing out of the wound from his forehead, trickling down as slowly as ever, painfully torturing him of the past event that ever so nearly took his life away a couple of years ago… 

Grimacing to himself at the unwanted memory, his eyes failed to see the figure leaning against his rooms doorway and the dark, beady eyes that stared right through him.  

"Hangover hyung?" A deep, mellow voice sarcastically asked out of nowhere.

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[ Yoochun ]

Smirking to himself, he watched as Yunho quickly swiped his hand off of his face and looked up with a surprised expression right on his usually calm and chilled out face. He grinned mischievously and winked at his hyung, only to receive a glare from the other. He burst out laughing, crumpling down to the floor and technically rolled on the floor laughing.

“Yoochun,” Yunho hissed. “Exactly why are you in my room?”

“What? I’m not allowed here anymore?” He gasps out loud in between laughs.

“I asked a question first,” Yunho replies. “Answer it, Park.” 

“Alright, alright! Geez, bad morning for you much!?” He says as he picked himself up off of the floor and brushed the dust off of his shoulders. 

“Yeah, seeing your face the first thing in the morning didn’t help out either…” Yunho murmurs out. 

He only laughed back at his hyung’s early morning sourness and retorted, “Well esqueeze me, I was just checking up on my hyung just as any other responsible dongsaeng should…”

Yunho snorted back in response at the pun and sarcasm he had threw in there but couldn’t quite stop himself from chuckling at how stupid he at certain times, no, actually, all the time, sound like. 

“Hah. Responsible? My ass. For all I know, you’re just here to bug me like any annoying dongsaeng should.” Yunho replied, parroting back his words with a smirk. 

He chuckled and clicked his tongue, “Shame on you hyung, you shouldn’t use other peoples words like that. That’s plagiarism right there, you could get arrested for – “ 

Then a pillow suddenly finds right in front of his face, most probably thrown from his overly-irritated hyung sitting on the other side of the room. A chuckle could be heard from the other person as he, on the other hand, froze completely. 

“Hah! Take that! How’s my drool Chunnie-ah?” 

Ripping the pillow off of his face with disgust and spitting out feathers that randomly found themselves in his mouth, he shot his hyung a glare for his stupid action. He opened up his mouth and bellowed, 

“HYUNG!! JAEJOONG-HYUNG!! YUNHO-HYUNG HIT ME AGAIN!!”

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[ Yunho ]

“WHAT!? I DID NOT!” He shouted back as he tried to cover his deed up.

A loud laugh was heard floating from another room followed by footsteps that became louder with each passing step making their way towards the room they were at. Soon after, a man with silky black hair and hauntingly pale skin appeared at his doorway, with a smile upon his feminine face as he stood beside a whining Yoochun.

“You guys, it’s too early for your screaming match. We really don’t want to be thrown out of this apartment either. So please, keep it down will you?” The man calmly says.

“Hyuuuung!!! Look at what he did to my face!” Yoochun whined as he waved a finger to his face.

“But – “

“Yoochun, stop whining and Yunho,” The man continues. “Get up, we’re going to be late for school if you don’t pick your butt up off of that stinky bed of yours.”

And with that, the ebony haired man swiftly turned around and walked off to, most probably, the kitchen to prepare their breakfast. He smiled to himself as he caught one last glance of black strands from the mans silky hair before disappearing from his sight, along with the owner.

That was Kim Jaejoong.

His Kim Jaejoong.

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Heartoffire's Question: Hmm? How was that? I roughly plotted the story out into seven chapters but it might change, depending on my annoying muse. I'll be going to a school dance tonight (surprise, surprise right?) so I might not be able to update as quickly as I usually do but I'll try to write up the second chapter over the weekened ^^

Comment? Please? Yes? No? You don't know?~♥

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I'm feeling: groggy
I'm listening to: Insa - JaeJoong
 
 
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Na.....[info]underknight on March 28th, 2008 10:55 am (UTC)
Please oh please...
Please Please Please Please...

Do continou.... It's really REALLY interesting and temping.
Tough the first part worries me
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TheRetardedGenius...?: J[info]heartoffire03 on March 28th, 2008 10:58 am (UTC)
whoa. fast o.O
*hands you jaeho cookie* xDD~

oh don't worry! i will! i still have to piece of chapter 2 and i'll type it up :D
the first part's suppose to worry people >____>

thank you for the read! ^^
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Milk[info]moonbin_is_love on March 28th, 2008 11:03 am (UTC)
can spot 1st?
8D

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Milk: yunjeh[info]moonbin_is_love on March 28th, 2008 03:51 pm (UTC)
whoaaa
u have to continue this one 8D
definetely shud 8D

i found it so interesting
<3<3
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sthlmsyndrom[info]sthlmsyndrom on March 28th, 2008 12:12 pm (UTC)
oh, this was a very interesting chapter! update soon so that i can find out what will happen next =)
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ara_niey[info]ara_niey on March 28th, 2008 01:30 pm (UTC)
that was chunnie who hit yunnie?damn him for doing that to my baby..

this is interesting..continue then~^_^
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kattan69[info]kattan69 on March 28th, 2008 01:38 pm (UTC)
When Yunho said that Jae is his...does it mean that they are already in a relationship or is it Yunho's thinking only. Don't know why but I don't like Chun going in between them. This is just my fear.

Anyway, I hope the story ending won't be too angst. I don't want to cry...miserable enough already.
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[info]irerd_taga on March 28th, 2008 01:39 pm (UTC)
Yunjae is already established at this point of the story? Or is it just wishful thinking on Yunho's side?
More please?!
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win03die: Almería2[info]win03die on March 28th, 2008 02:14 pm (UTC)
i approve. i approve a lot.

so.. jae-ish with the witty and the nature of silent control we all love him for <3<3
do continue, i promise to read and throw comments.
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detskie[info]detskie on March 28th, 2008 08:19 pm (UTC)
more please....thanks for sharing !!!!

will be waiting for the next one <333
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kenshinjunkie03: sexy jae[info]kenshinjunkie03 on March 28th, 2008 09:40 pm (UTC)
can i say that i do like this fic, but i would love it if jae and chun got together, but i'll read it regardless since i love jae and chun so much^^
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twiglet71[info]twiglet71 on March 29th, 2008 11:22 am (UTC)
An interesting and good first chapter so I look forward to reading the rest xxxx
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Randix[info]deathbyaccident on March 30th, 2008 03:47 am (UTC)
I clicked it when I saw Jaechun (LOL), and with how things are going, I think this is going to be interesting. Will be watching with a keen eye for the Jaechun Yunjae. XD
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on March 31st, 2008 12:33 am (UTC)
ohs? really? JaeChun? LOOLL.
oh thank you! i'm still editing chapter 2 but i'll hopefully post the 2nd chapter up later this week :)

waiiiiiiiiiiiit. YunJae? i thought you said JaeChun? :S *is dizzy*
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Kelly:}: Couldn't ask for more ♥[info]storm_andstress on March 30th, 2008 10:49 am (UTC)
Another fic, dongsaengie (I am still rattled by the fact that I'm older than you. By what, a few months? When is your birthday, anyway? :D)?

What the hell is 2U up to? LOLLL ♥.
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on March 31st, 2008 12:32 am (UTC)
yes, another fic jie jie *pinches ur cheeks*
3 months older than me ^^ the idiot you're talking to right now was born on july 3 :DD

ooh, i danno. something 2DO with jae. *gets shot*

wo ai niiiiiiiiiiiii~♥
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Kelly:}: Couldn't ask for more ♥[info]storm_andstress on March 31st, 2008 02:03 pm (UTC)
Mei mei, for the love of Yunjae, I do not have pinchable cheeks, lol!

Guh, barely 3 months! And my birthday's in less than 2 weeks! 12th April... *hinthintcoughcough* And duh something 2DO with Jae, it always has :D

Wo ye ai niiiiii ♥.
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Glasses!Jae[info]heartoffire03 on March 31st, 2008 09:24 pm (UTC)
Jie jie, for the love of Yunjae, there really is nothing wrong with having pinchable cheeks. u earn a ton of kawaii-points for that y'know ^^

SEE!? I told you you're older! I knoww! I put it on my phone :D I won't forget it since you have the same b-day as my aunt ^^ Since I obviously can't fly myself to Singapore and give you something, what would you like me to write? :D

AHA. Yesh, of course. EVERYTHING revolves around Jae. that bastard, i want to be him

xie xie!! aishiteruu~♥
btw, that means i love you too RIGHT? sorry, i'm still learning chinese >.<
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Kelly:}: Gods never die ♥[info]storm_andstress on April 2nd, 2008 03:01 am (UTC)
A ton? Oh really? Maybe Jae'll gimme some kawaii points, HAHAHA! *gets bricked*

And you put it in your phone!!! Ha, what a coincidence! :D You'd write something for me? My lovely mei mei! I wouldn't mind anything you write me, you know that ♥. But fluff, yes fluff. Fluff FTW!!! *blows cyber hugs and kisses*

And xie xie means Thank You, my dear! :D But aishiteru means I love You (Which I do ♥.) in Japanese doesn''t it? :D
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TheRetardedGenius...?[info]heartoffire03 on April 5th, 2008 12:30 am (UTC)
of course i will! anything? ANYTHING? xDD~ surely. fluff? aigoo~ i really suck at that....it's to....fluffy? *gets shot*

yes, yes. i KNOW that -.-
i was just jumping around the languages i know to say i luuuuuub chuuuu~ ♥
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on April 5th, 2008 04:39 pm (UTC)
it's interesting how Yunho seems to have forgotten Yoochun's misdeed..the three of them look close...I wonder if Jae is with Yunho now...hm..this is gonna be a love triangle huh?

Is the Jaechun gonna be one-sided?? Can't wait for the updates...
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TheRetardedGenius...?: Jae![info]heartoffire03 on April 6th, 2008 03:00 am (UTC)
mmhmm, good morning unni! ^^ it's 10:56 AM there now right? :P OHAYO GOZAIMASOU!

yeah, the three of them are really close deh? and yeah, you can say it's going to be a love triangle...*sniggers*

oh and yes again! the jaechun's obviously going to be one sided...although, there'll be a few....twists here and then. hopefully they'll work this time....

hmm? who said yunho forgot about yoochun's misdeed? hm? *smirk*
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on April 6th, 2008 03:30 am (UTC)
yes!! Ohaiyo!! It's night time for you right?

So should i say Oyasuminasai my deariest dongsaengi!

*pinches your cheek* I missed you ! I missed you! I missed you! and I'm not joking or bootlicking here ne????

ah..so, Yunho has forgiven, but not forgotten ne???? Have you seen their latest PV? OMFG!! Yunnie look sabsolutely beautiful and someone was saying that jae looks like Yunho was in his pants, bwhahaha ROFLMAO!!

How are you? You better? All ok? No more cast and stuff??
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TheRetardedGenius...?: YunJae3[info]heartoffire03 on April 6th, 2008 03:46 am (UTC)
good morning! ^^ ahh yes, it's 11:42 here at night but your dear babo dongsaengie isn't so sleepy yet :P

*shover herself next to you* i've missed you too! SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH! and yes, i'm being serious too. i'm sorry for my absence, this week in school was a BUMMER. i had to take 4 tests in a day, TWICE IN A ROW. aigo...

hmm~ yeah, you can say that...but i'm keeping quiet :P
OMG! YES I HAVE! *spazzes* i love the angsty!yunho mood in that...he was like touching the mirror and stuff *melts* and JAE....omg, don't even get me STARTED. i wanted to just dive into my screen and rip his shirt in half and...and....*dies* WHAT!? LMAO! REALLY!? LMAO!! which part did he look like that?! omg. did he had an orgasm face on!? OMG.

OH? me?! oh! i'm fine, more than fine actually! i'm back into running around the place and climbing trees and walls so yes, i'm fine now. thanks for the worry unni ^^ how about you? everything going good?
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chloe1910[info]chloe1910 on April 6th, 2008 03:52 am (UTC)
haha..doesn't Jae always have a smex up face or organsm face? He's just that darn hot.. I thnk it's the part where he was leaning on a wall and was like touching his chest or something like that!

I'm ok but really busy with work..

OMG! Gasp? You blimb trees and walls? Are you pulling my feet??? That sounds fun *get smack* Damn it..I should be telling you to take care of yourself and not get hurt..tsk tsk tsk..I shouldn't be saying that climbing trees and walls are fun....

Sorry to hear about your tests! that suck big time..i hated test when i was in school...that's the only reason why that I'm glad I'm out of school now.

*Hug you close and tuck you in*
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TheRetardedGenius...?: T-Booklet!Jae3[info]heartoffire03 on April 6th, 2008 04:02 am (UTC)
hmm....true....very true....but still, it's extra special when you actually see his eyes rolling back and his mouth sliding open....omomomomomomo, the mental image is killing me....i better stop...>-< OOH!!! THAT PART!!! yes that...oh goodness me *drools*

aigo. i hope everything's good with work. take care always okay? don't overwork too much okay? just take it easy hmm?

YEAH MAN!! i've been climbing ANYTHING that can be climb-able since i can remember. i remember, when i was little, i climbed this tree and fell off of it halfway there and broke my elbow and had stitches up my head. BUT I'M STILL ALIVE! SEE?! :D during weekends (and sometimes after school) i climb on trees and just relax and/or read a book or something...often times, i fall asleep on top of it >.< my whole family KNOWS where to find me when i go "MIA" xDD~

aigooo~ don't remind me of them...for now, i'm done with them, THANK GOD. ahhh~ you're so lucky! D< *is jealous*

*purrs* LOLL.
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xkhan[info]xkhan on April 14th, 2008 06:27 pm (UTC)
love it already=)
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